Please Review My Updated Website, ALL Feedback is Greatly Appreciated Thanks All.

[Phil T]

Hey all I would like as much feedback as possible from you guys
I've spent a few days updating and tweeking things here and there on my site phil-tobin.com
could you please pay extra attention to my BLOG and ABOUT ME sections.
Thanks all, look forward in receiving all your views .

 

[roggy]

Site looks good but it loads slowly for the first time visiting. I would suggest you change your hosting. I don't see any blog posts at your blog link, maybe you've just built this site so that you haven't got any content on it.

You should probably have a form on your Contact us page instead of using a direct link to your email which easily get more spam emails.

 

[AndiLim]

As for the layout I like it its simple, it looks clean. The content is pretty good as well. For the about-me section you really talked about yourself is that how it works? Isn't it it will be good if it will be about the website itself? You can actually add more information so that users can identify what your website is about. I do agree with Roggy, you should put a call to action banner, and a contact us page, Instead of saying that check-out the 7-days video. You can also add social media accounts if you have, this will help in building visibility or traffic to your website. Aside from that everything works fine for me, just need to do some polishing stuff.

 

[Ron Killian]

I think it looks good as well. Loaded quite fast for me. Each page loaded quickly. Don't know why some one would say to get different hosting. Don't make sense.

I think it's a great idea to talk about yourself on your about page. That's what it should be about. So people can get to know, trust and like you. Can make it easier to sell your stuff.

As already mentioned, I couldn't see any blog posts either, so can't comment. Well, looks like just one blog post? I personally don't like big blocks of text, makes it like work to read. Could use some text formatting to make it more enjoyable to read.

Don't know what else to say right now, just more a sales page with plenty of ads. Pretty much all promotional right now. Not saying that is bad